The Biscuit Tin

Hey everyone,

Every month I do 20 Green Room reviews for Lady Lizz's Order of the Ravens. I've just finished that this month and would like to step out of there for a wee bit.

So if you've got any poetry that's lying around gathering dust, a short story with 2 reviews that's nowhere near as polished as it could be, or a long-running novel you'd like to me to start at the beginning of, here is the place!

p.s. If there is something specific in the GR you would like reviewed, I'll still happily do so

Hi @BiscuitsLeGuin, could you review my story Dreaded Dinner Party (Prologue)? So far I have 14 chapters of it posted, but I wouldn't mind if you reviewed as much or as little as you like. Any feedback on the characters, plot, and grammar would be appreciated.

Will do! Pretty sure I noticed a chapter of that in the GR so I'll try and get up to that by the end of the month

Meow! ^-^
Hi there @BiscuitsLeGuin, could you please review, Engulfed- Chapter Three
It's been in the Green Room for a while now...

^-^ Thank you!!
(Also, I greatly appreciate it if you could review the other chapters as well)

Will definitely read the other two first yeah

You asked me to post these here
Prologue
Compendium: Prologue

Chapter 1
Compendium: Chapter 1

Cheers, yeah. Will do these in between my reviews of Dreaded Dinner Party

Hey I'm working on a shorty story for a gift and I need some proofreading and reviews asap. It's untitled and call short story in green room. I'm fairly inexperienced in this sight and would love some help lol

Cool, will get to it

Hey, Biscuits, could you review the prologue to my novel please? I need a few more opinions on it.

Hope, Fill Dark Places - Prologue

Thanks! <333

Sure thing @RubyRed. I'll probably get to it tomorrow morning for my Team Tortoise review of the day

i need help with my tenses n my pace. pick whichever u like

Beginning (part1)
Family and Friends (part2)
Fluffs (part3)

hey, i'll try and get to these I have a lot of essays by now so it might be next month but i'll do my best

Hey there Biscuits! If/when you have time, I would really appreciate some reviews on chapters 1.2 and 1.3 of my Blue Powder novel. They are both still in the green room, and you are welcome to check out 1.1 if you want to get caught up! There's no rush, but they've been sitting in the GR for quite a while, and once they get out, I have other chapters to post. Again, thanks so much, and happy holidays!

If when you have time The Way We Hide Could use a review.