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ExOmelas · 2017-06-11T23:36:00Z

Hey everyone, Every month I do 20 Green Room reviews for Lady Lizz's Order of the Ravens . I've just finished that this month and would like to step out of there for a wee bit. So if you've got any poetry that's lying around gathering dust, a short story with 2 reviews that's nowhere near as polished as it could be, or a long-running novel you'd like to me to start at the beginning of, here is the place! p.s. If there is something specific in the GR you would like reviewed, I'll still happily do so :)

Fishr

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Tue Oct 01, 2019 1:09 am

Fishr says... · Tue Oct 01, 2019 1:09 am

Hi Biscuit! Could you please review my second half in the green room? I could really use a second pair of eyes with character development and how the story flows in terms of making sense.

British Love, Boston Affection (part II) (Rated R)

Thank you!

The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.

AlexWrites

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Fri Jul 10, 2026 5:35 pm

AlexWrites says... · Fri Jul 10, 2026 5:35 pm

Hey there, ExOmelas! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.

This is a message just to let you know that I have locked and archived this thread due to inactivity (of more than two years). We do this to keep the forum organized and make it more likely for the writers and poets to get the feedback they seek. If you'd like to reopen this thread at any point in the future, please contact me or any other resources moderator and we'd be more than happy to reopen it for you! Thank you for volunteer service to reviewing so far, we really appreciate it.

Good day!

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