Link to work:writers' block Author’s Note: this left the green room because of really unhelpful reviews, make sure to leave some constructive criticism
Hey, I was wondering if you could take a look at the first few chapters of my novel here, or as many as you can. They aren't too long. If you can only do one, I'd prefer you started at the beginning. Thanks so much!
Link to work:Yesterday Description: A five year romance told in memories. Author’s Note: It should be obvious when you read, but it's non-linear. Other: It's a film script with no dialogue. I'm hoping to shoot this over the summer which is why I want more feedback.
Thanks a million!
All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them. -- Walt Disney
@Elinor: sorry, but I prefer not to review works that are 16+ or 18+! Let me know if there's something else you'd want me to read and review, and I'll be happy to do it.
Hey @PrincessInk you can review Till There Was You instead. It's a companion piece with the same two characters, so I would appreciate a focus on character development in the review, as that would be the most help to me. Let me know if you have questions and I can give you some more context if you would like!
All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them. -- Walt Disney
Link to work:Reaching Wide Audiences in Serialized Television Shows Description: A compare/contrast essay between Avatar: The Last Airbender and Trollhunters: Tales of Arcadia. Author’s Note: In particular I'd love you to double check my grammar and spelling. Also, and recommendations on how to condense it would be appreciated (I'm over length haha). Also, this essay is due this Sunday (2/18/18) so if there is any way at all that you could review it before then that would be amazing. If not I still appreciate feedback on my work so that I can grow as a writer. Other: Thanks in advance.
