The Revolution DT

@Mage May I post as well, hopefully before the next Hooded Figure post? I'm kind of late in this party, and Kysaline and Greywood got some business to settle. I'll try to post that third one as soon as I can, too, but to be honest, things are getting pretty darn crazy over here. And well, the 5-years trip is soon to begin, so there's that.
But hey, I can still write, so don't you guys worry, Twaggy'll be fiiiiiine.

Also: after posting, I'll catch up with all of the posts and come back to the DT with some general impressions and entertaining moments I had readin' y'all. 'Cause I mean I kept reading how you all wrote great posts and I didn't get to play my usual cheerleadin' role for a while, so gotta get back to it

I am double-posting for the sake of attracting attention on the fact that I HAVE POSTED AND SALL PLANIFY THE NEXT ONE TO SEE HOW FAST I CAN WRITE IT.
Given that I'ma freakin' snail, it's still gonna be hard, but y'know. Gotta make plans.

@Sheyren do PM some details if I somehow messed up Greywood's character in this post, 'cause I had to re-read yours several times, and boy that guy's a freakin' gladiator. Taking care of the next part is still doable for me though, don't ya worry.
Nooooooow, time to catch up with other posts!

I hope you enjoy what you read, Tort. Also, I loved your post and how you used stuff from the post that convinced all of you guys to join. Kysaline's reactions to it were very entertaining.

Kysaline once again raised an eyebrow. She knew for sure that CePrim didn't write that way, which meant that he had quoted this. Apparently the writers of this myth hadn't ever heard about redundancy.

Apparently the reader of this myth hadn't ever heard about emphasize.

But in all seriousness, I really enjoyed this part.

I'll put this in a formal post later, but I have some Resistance information that I would appreciate you eventually incorporating into your last post (since I know you have a lot to do, it definitely doesn't have to be right away) because I have evil plans and those would be useful for said evil plans. It's pretty basic stuff.

The Resistance was formed three years before the storybook starts, and is headed by a man named Ryder Salvai. No one outside of the Resistance knows what the mysterious leader looks like. If you feel up to the task, you could include some pretty outlandish guesses about him.

Awesome post, @Tortwag! One little thing that you don't have to fix in your post but just so you know, Greywood wears all his armor over his jacket. Other than that, everything was perfect.

Oh @Mea maybe Aquestioning can capture his daughters after a raid in his village? It'd serve for introducing her and forcing him to join Lumm. What do you think about that?

If only one of the daughters is kidnapped, can I suggest that it's the older of the two? That way if Joseph decides to join Lumm (I keep grinning everytime I write that because I know it would upset him to be called that. ) because The Hooded Figure would be confused about who he's talking about (he only knows about the younger of the two).

Also, @Omnom, I promise I'll PM you about Aquestioning soon. I just need to write the post for this and review something because #TeamTortoise until I slack off and am forced to join #TeamHare.

@Mage I shall! Not finished yet, but i'mat age 2 already. So far so good.

Lol, glad you liked that, it was just as fun to write. And... Well, emphasize, sure, but c'mon, it totally felt exaggerated XD Well, for her anyway, I for one have read enough fairy tales to not have any trouble with that kind of narration :3

'Kay, please do that. And btw, does that mean that I completed the challenge? A good half-to-three-quarters of this post was mostly Kysaline's thoughts on the resistance, the Hooded Figure, Notch and Herobrine and how it affected her. Does that count, or does the fact that it was followed up by the rest of the events means that I still didn't complete the challenge?
And yeah, don't worry, I can incorporate that stuff soon enough, it's just a matter of creative editing. No biggie.
Lol. Lumm. Nah, it's his destiny, he'd get used to it XD

I planned to do that, actually. To the ouside world, Ryder is basically Zero the Legendary Reploid from the Megaman Zero series XD That's, at least, what I planned to go for.

@Sheyren ...He wears his armor over his jacket. That totally makes sense actually, but dang, poor jacket XD I'll keep that in mind though, I can at least reword his description a bit to make that clear. And thanks, glad you liked it!

This whole storybook's storyline vaguely reminds me of Akame Ga Kill. Vaguely.

I can see why. youngsters fighting against corrupted empire and all - we're not all assassins though XD
And uh, considering that I'm there and that I'm gonna do my own lil' game-breaking thing later on, it might remind people of other references.
...Heheheheheheheheheheheheh...

Hmmmmmmmmmmm suspicious

Here, have a hint:

Spoiler

That's all you're getting, folks! That lil' asterisk is the hint to my, uh, future plot. Don't worry, you'll only get it by the time it actually triggers itself, hehehehAHAHAHAHAHAHA XD

@Tortwag Might this asterisk have to do with the web comic involving a story about robots coexisting with humans... I'm thinking of Gadget World.

Nice try, but nope! The whole thing I'm plotting isn't actually very related to Gadget World :3

Darn.

@Omnom - That would probably get him to join them, but I'm not really sure why they would want to do that - they definitely wouldn't have Joe's loyalty, and to me it sounds like a risk. Unless they need him for something that wouldn't give him room to subtly betray them.