Deanie's Reviewing Business II

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KaiTheGreater
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Wed Mar 23, 2016 2:40 pm
KaiTheGreater says... · Wed Mar 23, 2016 2:40 pm
Could you please take a look at my two latest poems, Untitled and You and Me and Infinity? Title suggestions for the second (yup, Y&M&I, got it ;) ) would be appreciated. That one's a little more rough overall, but for Untitled I'm mostly looking for input on the style.
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eldEr
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Wed Mar 23, 2016 10:33 pm
eldEr says... · Wed Mar 23, 2016 10:33 pm
*coughs*

oy. I would so much appreciate your thoughts on this.
Heartlines - Prologue

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RubyRed
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Fri Mar 25, 2016 2:40 pm
RubyRed says... · Fri Mar 25, 2016 2:40 pm
It would be so very nice if you'd review this for me: The Heart of a Warrior ch. 1 Thanks! :D
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Review link below!
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Deanie
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Fri Mar 25, 2016 4:33 pm
Deanie says... · Fri Mar 25, 2016 4:33 pm
Tomorrow morning shall be reviewing morning! I am going to get to these :3
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