Feed the Dragon!!! Dragongirl Ready To Review!!!

Hello, you have clicked on the right reviewer!

I am 12 reviews away from getting my next star so I am super motivated to review.

When I review your work I will point any grammar problems or typos I catch but I prefer to review the story, it's flow and the characters! I strive to be positive but honest at the same time.

Please let me review your stories!!!

Dragongirl

Hey, I would like a review on my new story. I don't care how brutally honest you are. Please. I need to get better!

Here's the link:

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/RedMoon/Rayas-Heritage-Chapter-One-120547

Thanks!

Hey Redmoon, I will review your story tonight. I am at work right now so it may be a little later.

-Edited- Review done!!! I want more!!!

Please review this work of mine
The Real You

Eh, if possible, could you review my work then? :~

House Red - Chapter 1: Preparations

@gauravkundu32 , The Real You is reviewed!

@TheSparringPanther,

Red House Chapter 1 has been reviewed!

I must have more! Feed the dragon!!!

Thank you so much Dragongirl for your detailed review.

gauravkundu32@

It was my pleasure! If you would like anything else reviewed let me know!

Hey! Could you please check out and review my novel? You've already read the prologue and you said you enjoyed it but you didn't read any more. I really need as many opinions on my work as I can get because I want to self-publish. I need people helping me get it as good as I can and spot my typos because I'm rubbish at editing my own work!

Here's the link to the first chapter : The Progeny: Chapter 1 (Revised)

If you don't have time to review multiple chapters or don't want to read a whole novel, could you review one of the latest chapters? Because they have the least reviews.

Thanks you!

@MissGangamash okay, so how 'bout we make a deal? I will review a chapter at a time of your story. After I review a chapter of your story and you have seen the review. You come back here and post the next link. That way I stay modivated and this post get bumped up.
I am at work right now but I will review the first chapter when I get home today.
What you say? Deal?

That sounds great to me Is there anything you want me to review of yours to repay the favour?

@MissGangamash,

Chapter 1 is reviewed!

It is super nice of you to offer to review in return. You don't have to at all but if you want to. You could review any of the chapters of my story The Bully

The Bully. Chapter 1.

Here is a link to the first chapter.

Thanks for the review on Chapter 1

I've reviewed the first chapter of The Bully for you.

Here's the link to Chapter 2: The Progeny : Chapter 2