May I have this dan-- R-review? (Waltzing's Reviews)

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Sat Apr 11, 2015 4:03 pm

WaltzingDreams says... · Sat Apr 11, 2015 4:03 pm

Alright, I know I've been offline for so long, but now I'm back and free to review all 'em requests. I honestly don't know if I'm harsh or what, I guess you guys could just check my profile if you want to see some sample reviews of mine

What I review:
-novels/chapters (so as long as you give me a brief summary of the story or at least enough time to catch up)
-practically any literary work

What I DON'T review:
-song lyrics (ironic as it may be)
-anything Sci-fi (unless we negotiate)
-anything that's annoyingly childish.
-works that have unreasonable deadlines

What you would expect from Waltzing: :mrgreen:

-a great ~~laugh~~ review!

I am generally good at identifying redundancy, proper wording, plot holes, grammar, sentence/paragraph construction, imagery and details of character development/sketches. Besides technical help, I am also good at moral support as a bonus! Link me to your work then sit back, relax and wait for the Waltzing's review.

All my reviews are free.

I hope this was enough to convince you that I'm your girl for your works! I really want to review this summer...and get my next star. :smt001

So.... Shall we dance? :smt002

Last edited by WaltzingDreams on Thu Jul 02, 2015 1:34 am, edited 1 time in total.

"I believe I am--just a little bit--indecisive."
"You're mad."
"Name me a writer who isn't."

Don't be shy and ask for a Waltzing Review. :mrgreen:

Dragongirl

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Tue Apr 14, 2015 3:15 pm

Dragongirl says... · Tue Apr 14, 2015 3:15 pm

So I've got a short story I would love you to check out if you have the time. Here's a link if you could do it.

Devils and Demons

Thanks buckets!

DG

"Every writer I know has trouble writing." - Joseph Heller

~ A word to the wise ain't necessary, it's the stupid ones who need advice.~
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WaltzingDreams

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Thu Apr 16, 2015 12:02 am

WaltzingDreams says... · Thu Apr 16, 2015 12:02 am

Thank you for the request. Will get on it soon

"I believe I am--just a little bit--indecisive."
"You're mad."
"Name me a writer who isn't."

Don't be shy and ask for a Waltzing Review. :mrgreen:

RedMoon

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Mon Apr 20, 2015 10:30 pm

RedMoon says... · Mon Apr 20, 2015 10:30 pm

I really need a grammatical review of this story. If you would like to put in your two cents about the story in general (style or whatever) I would love that too!

This is the first chapter of a story about a girl who inherits big from her grandmother, who she never knew.

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/RedMoon/Rayas-Heritage-Chapter-One-120547

Thanks!

Remember, God loves you!

WaltzingDreams

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Tue Apr 21, 2015 1:00 am

WaltzingDreams says... · Tue Apr 21, 2015 1:00 am

Thanks for the request! Expect the review within the day

"I believe I am--just a little bit--indecisive."
"You're mad."
"Name me a writer who isn't."

Don't be shy and ask for a Waltzing Review. :mrgreen: