PMD: Seventeen Plates DT 2

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Double posting for the sake of asking if AstralHunter can give me permission to use his nemesis as an enemy later.

I predict an epic engagement soon involving our favorite little traitor and his new found allies against our happy band of humons. Permission granted? (PM me)

forget that DT post, I think astrals fine with it.

Bet you guys weren't expecting a two-parter! I can't wait to write the second half! The first was so emotionally involved, I literally felt Riley's anger and sorrow as I wrote it.

Wow. Great posts from the both of you Char and 15253.
I can't wait to see more of Ren and Riely, and I like the sound of Frost making an appearance.

@15253: I'll be sending a PM in a little while here so we can discuss the matter. I'd send it now, but school's in 10 minutes and I'm going crazy trying to complete all of my final exams (all 5 of them) before the 29th.

Excellent job, 15253 and Char! Those posts are amazing! Char, your post was very emotional and surprising. Even though it was about 8:45 P.M., and I had to get ready to go to bed in a few minutes, I couldn't stop reading what you created - it was so impressive! The anger, sorrow, the rush of emotions; all of those captivated me, and the end was quite surprising. This is one of a two-parter? I look forward to your next part!

Well done, 15253. It was interesting seeing Ren's conflicting emotions and the crisis that he's in the middle of. He doesn't care much for the Resistance, but he also knows it would be a bad idea to stay at the Shrine of Safety, so he follows the procession heading to Frostpoint. Yes, you did a good job describing everyone, and I'm impressed by how accurately you described the characters. When I find some spare time, I'll be writing a post to follow up yours. It won't be too long - I don't have much time - but I'll do the best that I can.

(Weird. Sometimes I talk like a machine, and sometimes I talk like the happiest person in the world. )

Darn, 2 minutes until school starts. Have a good day, everyone!

@TheSilverFox, you are correct.

@15253, just remember, I still have to make a post for both Jewels and Gabriel, so my post will be out of order.

@Verser, we already have a Zoroark too, but since Bloodmoon is the only one, I suppose another won't be that bad. (@Robusto, I keep tagging you with the hopes that you'll respond to Verser's request, but you seem to miss it. )

@Buggiedude2340, I may or may not have forgotten what those "key words" are, since our last conversation ended abruptly on my part and our last proper conversation was literally months ago. But you don't have to worry about my latest idea - it will be awesome! (And I never use that word, so take that as an indication.)

15253, if you mean to use Ho-Oh, you have to tell me what you are planning first. If you plan on using Yveltal, then you can do whatever you want, since he's not Gabriel's nemesis anymore. (Only Char uses him now, so if anything, you'd have to ask him for permission.) If you plan on using any other NO Legendaries, go ahead - I'm done with them for now. Also, your post was surprisingly philosophical. Well done.

@Charizard821, I haven't had the chance to read your post yet, but I shall read it as soon as I can.

@AstralHunter: What is Verser's request?

oh my god, I completely forgot we had a zoroark. o.o

my request was to be a zoroark in the prequel sb

@AstralHunter Ho-Oh is already at the Glacial Museum so I was assuming he was going to fight anyhow. That is unless you plan to use him differently?

@Charizard821 also, I could use Yveltal seeing as he is not only a part of the NO who's not at Frostpoint but is also the polar opposite of Xerneas. Doth thou grant me permission

@Charizard821 So you finally got to write this dialogue, huh? Time to react to it! And the post as a whole, to be fair.

-Lol, did Riley and Flurry just acted like Twinkiel would upon meeting Latios? 'Cause that thing was awesome, let me tell ya.
-Ha. Holdin' hands. Good. Let the romance keep goin'.
-What's ironic is that I never actually chased the Legendary birds in Platinium. I already captured them so many times in Fire Red that I just transferred them. Still a greatly appreciated reference, though
(And Articuno WAS always a pain to capture.)
-one thing you had no possible way of knowing but that I think I should tell you so that you can remember it whenever you get Twinkiel in your post again: he never alters the name of people he holds in great esteem or people he might be infatuated with, AKA Spadassya 89%, or Ariala, 10%, 1% because she's "part Gengar". (which is the reason why he'll always call Gabriel Gabriel and not... Well... Y'know, because Gabriel managed to verbally wound Mewtwo. Which is boss.)
So yeah. But it fits his character to call her Spaddy, soooooo it's not a complain. Again, there was NO way you could know.
-Now this is the part where I blatantly state that you're a pacing genius, and that this is where long posts truly shine. A dialogue with Twinkiel = light-hearted mood most of the time. And then you switch that to Riley's reaction upon discovering Articuno's disappearance. YES-MATERIAL. TWINKIEL APPROVED.

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-now that was a cute moment, even I gotta admit it. Too bad Riley ruined it to add even more drama.
But seriously, nice job, I enjoyed that post, and not just because Twinkiel was there.

EDIT: May I add something? If Riley goes all the way to Mt.Providence on foot (which he can, as Riolus can parkour several kilometers in mere hours), he'd have to pass throught the Sazandora Desert, especially if he does it on impulse.
...And... There's a Cacturne waiting for a Resistant Riolu around that corner. I don't think he cares if if it's not the same or not. Food for thought!



@15253 Same treatment, as it was also a pretty interesting post.
-I'm really starting to like Ren's thoughts, it's too bad he doesn't share them. He'd feel... Better, maybe.
-Excuse me for being stupidly confused, it's not your post's fault, it's my brain's. I just want to make sure I understand: Ren's group (with Aegeas and all) went to Terraria with everyone else and then separated to begin moving towards the Glacial museum, right?
-Wow. It's pretty cool how much Ren understand himself :O I think he's by far one of the wisiest Humons we have.
-Now that's also brilliant. "Lugia". <--- One word, leaves us confused as to why EXACTLY does he holds a grudge against Lugia, what he's gonna do with said grudge, etc. Darn I love how you take short posts and nail them o.o

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@Robusto am I to write the Cutthroat Path bit now? Or the stop to Terraria first?

thanks guys :3 I'm trying to make my posts interesting in the whole psychological stuff goin on. and yes we are going to the Glacial Museum, I hope your brain recovers soon.

Sorry @15253. Your request has been denied. Hopefully you can find another Legendary?

Also, @Tortwag, that Sonic thing made my day! Well, that, and "Die in a Fire", which I will find use for somewhere in this SB. From your mostly pleased reaction, can I conclude that I got Twinkiel's personality right? (Fingers crossed!)

naw its not a must have thing It would just help a bit.

Anywho, whos up next