PMD: Seventeen Plates DT 2

Well. I have returned.

....no, I was kinda just gaming and not checking Yws but I'm gonna be moar active and stuff so:

@AstralHunter Sorry....and yes. I believe this captures the deeper part of Ren as a character. The undertone, (i'd call it a baseline XD) is filled with tension and has an ominous feel to it. Then theres the lyrics that fit in perfectly with his struggle of trying to, yup, "get it back".

Then the beat for the chorus (I don't know music terminology so please excuse me) feels hopeful, key part being "feels" but doesn't is just on the edge of bliss and hopelessness embodied by the rising and falling beats coinciding. (XD this must sound like complete BS but Im trying.) Then the bridge (I think) actually sounds like gears crunching which is in essence disorder and mayhem, when things don't mesh, when it breaks and falls apart. And on top of that, the final half minute is "I can get it back" over this rage filled beat of disorder and an overall ominous beat.

Hah.....yup I officially cant write. I hope this makes sense.

@whoeverelsementionedme umm hi! o/

(sorry double posting, I know the rules but rules were meant to be broken and all that so hah! In your face order and cleanliness!!!)

@AstralHunter look at Vengeance by Hemsey I think that's also a good song.


Posting!

@TheSilverFox I could get Ren to interact with Aegeas (I spelled that right....right?)

@15253: Okay, I don't see why not. I'll see what I can do. And yes, you did spell his name right.

Posted! Doesn't include Aegeas yet but either you can start on that in your post or I can do it after Astral.


also, listen to this if you want. It helps me write.

NO, NO, YOU CANT DO THAT @15253! YOU CANT GO OFF SAYING YOU SUCK AT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT AND THEN WRITE....THAT!

*flips a table and throws papers in the air*

IM OUT! NOPE! CANT DO THIS ANYMORE. IM DONE!

*walks away ranting*

XD

Err, @Verser, you are joking, right? (I believe you are, but I've been wrong before...)

Also, I would love to comment on everyone's posts, since they are outstanding, but with my current schedule, that's not going to happen. (I should add that I am four reviews behind for LMS, and by next week, it will be seven. I shan't even mention the stresses of publishing a chapter every week. And especially not my extremely overdue SB posts. <_<)

y u do so much stuff

oh I must be the greatest at making jokes. Nah, hes my bro, I can do that to him.

I suppose I have an inexplicable hatred for free time, since I apparently decrease it whenever I get the chance. Well, it's like they say: there aren't pills...

@AstralHunter how did you NOT get @Verser's joke? We both have brothers, I'm pretty sure we had similar sarcastic situations at some point, lol.
As for your current troubles... Say, aren't you dividing your energy into too many things at once? No 'cause I'm familair with that, and it appears that if you don't find a way to orgnize your activities, everyting will crumble. But even so... *fires Moral Support Beam* Not lettin' ya do that. Good luck on whatever tasks you have to do, but seriously, I'm starting to feel like you need to dminish your amount of activities D:
^ food for thought. Not to be necessarily eaten.

@15253 ...Dude. That wasn't a post. That was freakin' poetry.
I mean it really felt like some kind of half dream, half conscious thing, which kinda was what Ren was going through. Wooooooooooow. I shall study your brain cells through this post and steal them, lol. I need them whenever I'm trying to figure out a deep character develpment, 'cause that. Was. Freakin'. Amazing. And such a short post too, as usual.

...*is genuinly mind-blown*

Sounds like a good post! Can't wait to read it.

@AstralHunter, as your friend and self-appointed advisor, I must advise you to stop putting things on your plate. Heck, I'll make it a quote to emphasize it.

"A full plate should not be added on to, lest some food that was never finished is thrown away."

Good? Hopefully? ^^

Seriously though, you need a vacation. Fiji anybody?

@Charizard821, the ironic thing is that I already had my vacation - it ended last week, Monday. Also, I appreciate your and @Tortwag's support. I really do. However, I simply used that post to complain. Nothing can be done about LMS, the reviews I need to write for it, or my exams (both musical and acedemic), but I have already decided not to write my short story, and I only have six SBs left - two have been persevering since last year, so they aren't going anywhere, two relatively new ones may or may not survive, one is almost complete, and the last I put out of its suffering earlier today. So believe me, I have already begun scooping things out of my plate.

GOOD. Keep doin' that until you have less and less stuff, and don't you DARE add more stuff on that plate once you're done eating >: (

And you're welcome for the support. It's 5$ a week, 10$ more for a Moral Support Beam.
Flourishing business, that one.
Jokes aside, be sure to catch up witht he post commentaries whenever you can, 'cause yes, the last ones (Robusto started the frenzy) are freakin' awesome.

@Tortwag thank you! I've been trying out new stuff for a while now and I guess this is the one. Thanks for the support guys this is a great group of writers