Young Writers Society

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Four, perfect, symmetrical, smooth white walls, and a similar white hard shiny floor and ceiling. And ...

Everything was happening too quickly and Vanessa couldn't help but feel alarmed by the way everything was turning out. She kept glancing at Lorelei, hoping that Lorelei would help curb ...

Whoop, whoop! I have finally arrived. Dearest apologies for being so late!! But here I am! In advance Id like to warn you that I am a very detailed reviewer ...

Hey, KaeRae here! First of all, this chapter was very well written. It is layered in suspense the whole time. The setting and main character's description is set up right ...

Hi! This is a great poem that wonderfully describes what it’s like to heal. I particularly love the imagery of the ocean in the first stanza. The most effective lines ...

I’ll take a look tomorrow! I’ll go ahead and post mine later. Probably also tomorrow lol

Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! HELLO! I did say I’d be back, and I’m back with my review (after like 3 days but that’s irrelevant)! ...

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the possessed S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Rose is accepted by the S Ranks, she ...

Hi, Isbah! Ljungtroll here with a review. As someone living in the Deep South of the US right now, I completely relate to the sweltering heat and it was a ...

Hey, KaeRae here! I liked the concept of this poem how only one person is in love with the other. I really don't think this is much of a review, ...

A poem I wrote about realizing I am healing

Dexter Thorne, international MI6 agent, is sent on a mission to retrieve a stolen microchip from Count Sergei Volkov, a powerful crime lord. But...!

I never thought I could write a review for a Minecraft poem that was both extremely simple and actually quite deep. And yet here I am, so I should probably ...

Hey there, Kate, I have read your short stories, but I've never seen you dabble in poetry. So, I'm here to write a short review on each of the poems. ...

Hey there Vampricone! :D Here for a quick review ^^ I read Part One so I do have the backstory. First off, I want to say that I think you ...

With how beautiful this poem is, I would very much like to see the words that evoked this sort of response. Scientifically, the sun's light is what gives the moon ...