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Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary The whole scene with Persephone, and this chapter was a rollercoaster of emotions. Especially the scene with Persephone and Josephine having a heartfelt conversation.

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Persephone hesitated but closed her eyes, her chestnut silken locks falling from the intricate bun that Josephine had spent hours working on for her. Among ...

Thank you for all the great responses! I find, nowadays, that fully planning out a story burns me out by the end. I had fully planned out a story which ...

This poem talks about a fear I have had since I was around the age of 2. A bad experience with this creature has made me fearful of its presence.

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the mutated S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Wrath + Pride’s army arrives. In addition to ...

#15 Growing Up Poetic Style - 5 - Visual/Found Inspiration - 4 - Lyric Coin Flip - N/A - Incorporate into poem Lyric: "Like a Coming of Age" Survive school ...

Growing Pains Today's Inspiration: Today's song was Coming of Age by Foster the People (Again! What are the chances?). I rolled a rhyming poem and had to incorporate the song's ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : Well this was quite the tale here. Starting ...

Hello Hello I know this is an older poem and that you won't see this however I will still give my thoughts. I might not have much feedback as I ...

Let's see what happened after the exciting conclusion of the last chapter. What will Kita do now? That upon which my dragon's eye fixed I loved how you described the ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : Well looks like the preparations for this trial ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary A freezing grip wrapped around her wrist, and she was pulled down as well—the muffled and waterlogged screams of the other contestants vibrating throughout the ...

Mr. Hallwell. (From my story “Edward’s story-The adventures of Poppy McLain”).

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Writing is great as always! I liked the added descriptions of Medusa’s snakes moving around and occasionally hissing to express the emotions she may have ...

@goodolnoah Thank you! ^^

Hello Again, My Friend! It's me, Raven, and I'd like to (finally lol) review the next installment in this great collection using my Familiar method! Let's dive in, shall we? ...