Young Writers Society

Part one of a story about Age.

Hello Again, My Friend! It's been some time, but I'm excited for this chapter! Anyway, it's me, Raven, and I'd like to review the next chapter in this great story ...

Love love loveeeee the first part describing the car - i've never thought about it like driving a car but it fits so well. so many great metaphors and analogies ...

gorgeous word library without sounding like you took everything from a thesaurus - i like how the story fluctuates like the narrator is just speaking to someone without making it ...

my first real short story, about two disturbed orphans who do stuff :3

A poem about grappling with the grief of losing a loved one. This poem inspired a novel that I have began (see my portfolio).

I hope you don't mind leaving a review! I really love this work. "If my voice could cry out. If the vast nothingness didn't steal the words from my tongue. ...

Hi, I'm here to leave a quick review. Let me preface this by saying that I absolutely love this. It feels authentic and beautiful; a realistic expression of love. The ...

I loveeee this! I hope you don't mind me leaving a quick review! I absolutely see deep admiration in this writing. Your descriptive words elicit feelings of purity, youth, and ...

Hey, here to leave a quick review. I really enjoyed this poem. You use great visual language to evoke images. "The ruby liquid dropped to the white tile." I loved ...

Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review. This is such a beautiful work that evokes great feelings of nostalgia for me. I love how you used all lowercase letters; ...

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The beginning of a story of a man tackling the grief and bereavement of losing his beloved wife.

Hello there, human! I’m reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the mutated S’more? Top Graham Cracker - William and Taury find a magical stone that ...

#6 Push Me out to Sea Chosen for me by @Ley Poetic Style - 2 - Spoken Word Inspiration - 2 - Lyric Coin Flip - Tails - Incorporate Into ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : Well this was quite a cute little oneshot, ...