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No, no, I don't mind. Everyone, when they review, tend to "rewrite" things, and some of the things I agree with. It tells me your suggestions in the context of ...

Oh....thanks, guys. XD I feel special, and someone had better give my ego a good pop before my head swells too much. hahahahahahaha!!!! lol Editted again, because I'm still not ...

Yes, actually. These eight characters are basically my seminary class condensed. Everyone has contributed a trait to one or more characters, except Brother Sanchez, who is my seminary teacher in ...

No, this isn't the end; yes, there's more, but with all of the good reviews, I'm terrified to put it out there. XD It needs work, big time. The end ...

XD Thanks for noting it, Cooldude...I was trying to portray that Sage was trying to avoid the subject. It's his last night alive; he's trying to forget that he's going ...

Jiggity, the reason I withheld the information about their ages is because I'm trying to capture their ages the best I can in their dialogue. A thirty-year-old would talk differently ...

XD Thanks Jiggity, very much. Exactly the kind of critics I'm looking for. It's my first play, and I want to know exactly what's wrong with it. Thanks for not ...

hahaha Thanks for the interest. Actually, there is a reason Blaine has a sudden change of character. Has to do with his past, which will be revealed...um...next scene, I think? ...

THE SIXTH BOOK IS OUT!!! *squee!!* At least, I think it is....haha lol. haha I'm excited.... Holly doesn't die in the fourth book....I have no clue what you're talking about, ...

Haha thank you very, very much. That helped a lot. Like, you have no idea how much that helped. But Sage isn't stupid....he's educated...Dangit. -.- I'll see what I can ...

K, it's been fixed. Hopefully anyone who reads it now won't be able to guess that Jason's been dead so soon.

haha thank you sooooo much! Yay! I'm not as much a failure at fore-shadowing than I thought! lol I guess it really isn't futuristic, but it does take place in ...

OMG guys I made it in!!!!!! *squee!!!* Thank you soooooooooo much for your reviews! They helped me a LOT!!! *hugs all!!* Thanks again!!! You all ROCK!!!!

Hello my dear this was great even though i don't know what Los Malos is. Thank you! I'm glad you can enjoy it without knowing what that means...I thought I ...

hehe. I look forward to it too. Well, Bayer was Paco's probation officer, I think I said that. And he knows Reiko for other reasons. These are the only known ...