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Thanks for your reply! I like a little back and forth. It feels like a real workshop. ^^ Concerning chapters, it's true that in their own right they're their own ...

Thank you so much for your comments! I appreciate them! ^^ Yeah, this is just kind of a sketch, so it would take place in the middle of the story ...

No problem. ^^ I hope it helped. There's always editing to do! A story is never really done....XD

Thank you so much! You're totally right...I'll see what I can do to fix it.

Thank you SO MUCH!!! I really appreciate the review!!

A book like Hunger Games? Well if you like gladiator-esque books you might like Warrior Heir.

lol the beginning with the whip fight was pretty....awkward. that kind of thing happens like three times, and there's really no reason for it. But, at least I didin't read ...

Bit upset to hear Artemis Fowl mentioned! I'm very, very ashamed to say I LOVE those books -- mostly ashamed since they are probably meant for a slightly younger audience. ...

My first book I ever wrote. It was horrendous, really, very bad. However I hear the writer is very good looking so that makes up for it. XD XD omg ...

Got a copy. :D It was pretty good. There was some unnecassary cursing that got a little bit annoying after a while. Cursing doesn't bother me, but when it's that ...

Different than you imagined? huh. How did you imagine him at first?

XD I think it might be a bit harsh to say she has half a brain. I think she could be an excellent writer, if she just learned how to ...

I have to say that I agree with all of this. Except that I'm actually pretty plot oriented but Twilight had no real plot. It was just a bunch of ...

Thanks! Like I said, it's just an idea...I was toying with the idea of making Hannah a professor in a boarding school and one of her students are dead....I dunno. ...

Thanks very much! Yeah, I kind of tried to shift the attention of of Hannah and onto Jason...All I want the reader to know about her is that she can ...