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Re: Marionette
This was really cute! i loved it!
Jan 5, 2008 -
Re: I hate Life
It is kind of confusing , but it was good!
Jan 5, 2008 -
Re: Fade away
Awesome! Loved it! Bravo! Like gothgirl said, very emotional!
Jan 5, 2008 -
Re: I Am poetry
I love this! This was really good! Everyone else already pointed out the spelling and grammer mistakes do keep it up!
Jan 5, 2008 -
Re: Alone in the Storm
It's interesting. There are nice descripitions. People already pointed out some of your mistakes. I liked it!
Jan 5, 2008 -
Re: (no title...yet) Chapter 1
This isn't a real crit. because I'm, like, uber tired so... That was really good. I only really have one Q: Are they vampires? Please answer me so that I ...
Dec 30, 2007