znale1

Well.... This is pretty funny, but verryyyyyyyyyyyyyyy different.

Loved it and it was completely different to any other poem!

That's okay, I found this really helpful, and I'll make sure to edit it in the near future. Also with the mother thing I tried to make it as though ...

Look I literally don't care about your life, I'm only replying to you because you were being a snob to the guy who reviewed your work. People in YWS are ...

Hey Morrigan! I just wanted to say this review didn't help me at all, other than bring my self-esteem extremely low. "I head north into the easiest, quickest and safest ...

Thank you, this review was definitely very helpful! -znale1 :)

Dude, he was saying all this so you could succeed not be snobby and an arrogant little brat. If you're going to publish something except someone to correct your mistakes.

Thank you so much, this review made my day :) !

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Hey Annaclare! This poem is simple and it is realistic. You could also improve it though, you know spelling and punctuation. So here are some things you could improve on: ...

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Hey Annaclare! This poem is simple and it is realistic. You could also improve it though, you know spelling and punctuation. So here are some things you could improve on: ...

Wow! This poem is like how real girls react to when their best friends do something like this. I am guessing this happened to you before or someone you knew. ...

Hello! I found a mistake in this poem and it was this line and only this "who lost their lives, their soul" I think there is supposed to be a ...

Hey AwesomeSauce! I love your poem "As I fly around the world". I think you should not keep using the same words "As I fly around the world" other than ...

Hey guineapiggirl! I have a feeling you copied the name of spongebob :) . I like the way you made it rhyme but I think you should have made it ...