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Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) Mine is a short comment. I really liked the consistent rhyming you had through out this poem. Sometimes poems tend to have a ...

Hello there :) Well, I don't understand why this never got published :D . The story line is really creative and your writing style is very good. I liked the ...

Hello there :) But luckily for us, Sam’s parents didn’t really pay much attention to her. Don't start your sentences with "but". The gales seemed to be speaking to me, ...

Hello there :) I just adore romantic poems, especially when they are well written such as this one. Your approach was really creative and charming, it just took the words ...

Hello there :) First of all, I admire you for keeping the rhyme in this poem through out the poem! I quite enjoyed it. However, as personal preference, a poem ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) I really found this interesting. I commend you for building a pyramid out of words. I'll take it as a statement. What I ...

Hello there :) I really liked how light hearted this poem is. It reminds me of a nursery rhyme or something like a children's story of some sort. It's different ...

Hello there :) First of all, He didn’t have the privilege to tell me where or elaborate on his demands - I really loved the use of the word "privilege" ...

Hello there :) First of all, I have never seen snow before because it doesn't snow where I live and so I was expecting to get the feel from your ...

Hello there :) This was really funny. At first, before I got to the end, I thought we were talking about a man. Anyway, this was hilarious. I need you. ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) The thing that impressed me the most about this poem is the general idea. I thought it was very creative and I loved ...

Hello there :) I thought this poem was okay. The only thing special about it was the repetition of the words "this is humanity". Other than that, I guess I ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) There were quite a number of spelling and grammatical errors in your story, but I can see that the previous reviewer has outlined ...

Hello there :) I agree with Ashley. I found the letter very plain. Meaning that the person to whom it is intended will not feel that bad after reading it. ...

Hello there :) First of, I love your avatar! Alright, back to the review. I haven’t drinken alcohol or smoked anything or snuck out of my house or lied to ...