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Hello there and welcome to YWS LiteraryBeauty :) What an interesting introduction, I loved the depth and logic in it. I agree with theEnigma about your paragraphs, maybe you could ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) Well this is a very passionate piece you have here. I just have some concerns as it goes towards the end; it just ...

Hello there I thought I'd do the honours, mostly because I really feel I should say something about your writing; I thought this was great. I like the way you ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) Well, I really did not understand this, I don't know if Im not looking at it right so I'll base this review on ...

Hello there :) This is not completely bad. The problem I had though was the lack of punctuation; there are places in there that could have used a comma, a ...

Hello there AudreyHearts and welcome to YWS! :) This poem definitely has some potential. However, I found it a little shady; it not deliver enough to leave me satisfied, but ...

Hello there iheartbooks :) I think you did a pretty good job on this one although it was a bit cliche. I definitely love the truth that came out of ...

Hello there :) And welcome to YWS! This was an interesting poem. I liked how you approached the idea. It was also quite deep and it made me think; I ...

Hello there :) I can see you had a lot to say when you wrote this. But, I personally thought that this should have ended here Alone in this life, ...

Hello there This was actually not bad at all for a first try, in fact I would have NEVER guessed. I liked the parts where you used "dare not" in ...

Hello there :) I kind of disliked this on some occasions. Firstly, the idea is nothing new so for this particular direction I was looking forward to seeing something different ...

Hello there :) I personally think you should have stopped at the first part. I like how you manipulated your words to go around the poem, very creative even though ...

Hello there :) Hmm...I did not like this very much as poem. Call me old fashioned but it did not embody your typical poem. To me it sounded like the ...

Hello there cousin and eh...cousin :? :lol: I thought this was fantastic, the metaphor part. I liked how you meshed the similarity between the lightning and anger. However I kind ...

Hello there Artlover and welcome to YWS! :) This is very fitting that your first addition has to do with art. This was a very simple straight to the point ...