ziggiefred

Hello there :) I think that this is really good. The storyline is good, your storytelling is good. There is a lot of suspense and you describe your scenes so ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) So I get that this was from your diary but you did very little to make it into a story. Everything as you ...

Hello there :) Well, I think that the intension behind this post is quite creative. It could however use a little spicing up. I think that you gave too many ...

Hello there :) First of all, I would like to strongly suggest that before you post something, try really hard to go through it and check for spelling errors and ...

Hello there :) Since you're relatively new to YWS, I will welcome you...welcome. I think I've seen you around doing your part with reviews so I thought I'd pay you ...

Hello there :) This story is definitely sweet and calming. I'ts a very interesting take on trying to explain the dark side of the moon. Also, I find it very ...

Hello there :) First of all, I feel so guilty that it took me almost a century to review this chapter, I've just been so busy at school. Moving along, ...

Hello there :) This is quite good. It's well written, crafty, intelligent, thought provoking and enlightening. Thanks to you I know what a "fugue" is. Anyways, I think that you ...

Hello there :) I have to say that I love the wit behind this. It's really quite good. There was great use of imagery and great power behind it. Fizzing ...

Hello there :) I'm really sorry I took this long to give you a review. I'm here for long so I'll make it quick one. I think that you have ...

Hello there :) First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here. I thought this poem was absolutely lovely. I had a huge problem with the lack ...

Hello there :) I thought I'd do the honours. “All I wanna to do is get the hell outta here,” So your writing style has a lot of potential. The ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) I found this poem very enjoyable. I liked how it flowed, your rhyming was great and that repeating stanza, nice touch. Looks like ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) Well, I will second that! Moms are just great. The first thing that struck me was this one big blob of words. I ...

Hello there This was a very likable poem. I think the way you mixed up the different flavours to accompany your message was just so creative. I liked how original ...