zeroZyra

This certainly helps thanks. But about the ellipsis, it's not just ..., they were referring to missing letters that the protagonist couldn't hear so yea.

Thank you for your review, it means a lot. However, I don't know why but everyone keeps thinking that the mc is a girl. Anyway, about the confusing part, that ...

Oh well, then I guess it must be hard to imagine how she would've felt in those scenario's and accurately write it. It's still well done.

Wow, way to copy my review... Don't you have any dignity. You even copied my grammar mistake. people like you don't deserve attention.

I'm really sorry to break all of your dreams, but it's actually a guy... Someone had already told me that it was really vague but I had no way of ...

This actually helps a lot though. I didn't now about the those grammar issues, they were never thought at my school. As for the conversation, that has always been one ...

Thank you for your review, I guess I never really though about the fact his gender is never mentioned. For me it was always obvious. I'll put it in the ...