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thats good but what does this word mean ecstasy just so i can get it in my volcabulary

a really good poem TBR keep going

it even says and she talks to her self so thats 2:1 haha ohhh

to be fair she is insane (no offence) :lol:

lol great but seriously you should think do not talk to myself but hey its still great

its good but it says Now my aunt is a terrible cook was she a good cook before

thanks for the tips i just thought the poem out of my head when i was writing :) i kind of missed read the thing below the narrtive poetry (#-o ...

um you could posted that in pm

thanks and i'll keep that in mind

great poem keep it up :elephant:

nice very nice infact it was so nice it was fantasticly brilliant =D>

liked the rhyming \:D/ its great :D

hehe lol great thats fantastic

not only are you good at art your really good with poetry as well :D

intresting but too many commas but its good :D