This is a joke right?Sorry for being unpolite, but it isn't a good poem.
How did it turn out to be one big sentence without a full stop?Where did the capitals go?And grammar?
Let me give you an example.
It was the best day of my life,
even though no one was speaking to me or even relising I was there.
I got somewhere I wanted to go for all my life.
I had no friends and now I have everyone smiling at me.
But the next day I saw my mum and dad broken up.
They were looking at the news,
they found out I was dead
and I never noticed that was the worst day of my death.
It looks neater don't you think?Overall I love it!
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