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Re: A Criminal's Heart Chapter-3
Greetings again, shubhi! I’m still trying, against all odds, to produce something no one else has said yet. :D Wow, even more new characters. I’ve got to say, at this ...
Jun 19, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart- Chapter 2
Hey again, shubhi. : ) You know the drill: Lots of reviews, I dunno if I can say anything new or helpful, I’m going to try anyway. :D Huh, new ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart - Ch-1(Olivia)
Hey again, shubhi~! Again, you’ve gotten a lot of reviews for this chapter, so I’m probably not going to stumble on anything new for you here, but I’ll do what ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart-Prologue (REVISED)
Hi, shubhi! Wow, that’s a lot of reviews you’ve got here already—I can’t promise that I’ll be able to say anything that you haven’t heard before, here, but I’ll try ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: Luna 6.2
And, once more, I’ve arrived. (I’m running out of unique ways to say hello XD). Wow, this chapter has a lot of neat backstory and worldbuilding, and I think you ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: Luna 6.1
Salutations. :D So, another half chapter… this one definitely sparked my curiosity, and I’d love to find out more about what’s going on in this situation. This chapter did a ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: Luna 5
I’ve returned! Okay, before we start here, I’ve got a confession to make: I’m really not a big vampire person. I think this makes me some sort of bizarre anomaly ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Luna 4
I’m back~! Okay, I have to say that the narration in this chapter is a big step up from the narration last chapter—this gives me a much better idea of ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: Luna 3.2
‘ello again. : ) Huh. Plot-wise, I’ve got to say this was one of the most interesting chapters yet. I’m fascinated with this revelation about Josiah, it shows that there’s ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: Luna 3.1
Hi there, angel! Sorry of the pause in reviews, stuff at home kind of caught up with me, but I’m here now! And I have to say, I’m pretty intrigued. ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: Leander's Story pt. 5
And, hello again, Lunahlove! Okay, first of all, OMG. Second of all, O. M. G. Okay, I’m done now XD. Plot time. I actually didn’t mind the ending so much. ...
Jun 13, 2010 -
Re: Leander's Story pt. 4
Lunahlove~! Hi there! I’ve come around for chapter four. ^_^ Oh, wow. I’ve got to say, this is probably by far my favorite chapter so far. It really captures the ...
Jun 12, 2010 -
Re: Luna 2.2
Hey again, angel! Sorry for the delay on this one. ^^; Huh, well that was an interesting turn of events. I’m definitely curious to find out who these Hunter people ...
Jun 11, 2010 -
Re: Luna 2.1
And here I am again. :D Ready for chapter two! Once again, I think this was a good chapter for developing Asha. The scenes showing her relationship with her father ...
Jun 9, 2010 -
Re: Chapter Three
Hi Attolia! I’ve said it before, I’ll say it again—I loooooove Adele. She makes for an absolutely FABULOUS villain protagonist. She’s just so deliciously manipulative and cold, and it makes ...
Jun 8, 2010
