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Whoops, sorry there, time got away from me. ^^; This has been sitting, almost done, for days, but I just now got it finished. Anyway, another well done chapter! Your ...

Oh my gosh, I'm so late. XD I'm sorry! I was planning to review this from the first minute you asked me to, but somehow it all kind of got ...

XD Thanks for the free advertising! *feels special* I'm really glad you liked it. Excellent chapter. Owen is really growing on me, he's awesome. XD And I love the ending-- ...

Wow, another awesome chapter! I really like the subtle changes in tone we get when the POV shifts between each chapter, it helps us get to know the character right ...

Wow, Razor. This was a brilliant chapter, I'm really, really impressed. I really like all the metaphors you used to help pull us into Renee's feelings, to help us understand ...

LOL lateness. Sorry, Razor, a very lazy friend am I. Anyway, this was brilliant, as is everything else you write. Loved it. It was a great first chapter to pull ...

Hi there! This was a pretty good, though frankly, it's not without flaws, either. Good things first, though: the intro was a really good hook.Your dialogue was well-written and flowed ...

XD Poor Clover. Nice job with this! It was very funny, and the intro really pulled me in. One thing, though... is that all? Because if this is the end ...

Okay, good things first: Your protagonists remain interesting, I like their personalities and the dynamic between them. I’m really admiring your continued willingness to talk about the Canaby sister

Hello, your worst nightmare has returned to haunt you! The reviewer from the black lagoon is emerging to obsess over another of your stories... That's right, I'm back, with all ...

Sorry to say that the above reviewers have a really good point about those Goliath paragraphs up there. It will help, big time, if you break them up. In my ...

Hello there, and welcome to YWS! The formatting doesn't stay for anybody when you copy/paste, actually, you add italics, bold, etc. through html tags. It's a little annoying, but that ...

Hi there! I really like this start! It sounds interesting, right away I started to understand your main character and get involved in your plotline. You did a nice job ...

Oookay, I'm late as usual. XD Sorry, summer classes have stolen my life and run away with it. But I daresay you know how that is. ;) This was his ...

Gah, I'm so sorry this is so late! XD Driving school was kinda killing me. But I'm back now! Now to business! One, this story is not crap at all, ...