zankoku_na_tenshi

Hi, BlackSheep! I’m back for another chapter, and I think this one is a real improvement over the previous chapter—most of your showing vs. telling problem is gone, and is ...

Hi again, Pink! I’m back for another chapter, just as promised. I was actually really looking forward to reading this, moreso than I usually look forward to review writing, and ...

Hi, BlackSheep! Sorry, I know it took me a little while to get to this review, I can be a little slow to get these done. Well, the story does ...

Hello Pink~ Sorry this took me longer to get to than I had expected, I spent most of yesterday and today napping and watching Spongebob in a Vicoden haze, and ...

Hi there, horsegirl2~! I’m here to return your review on the first chapter of Assembly. ^_^ I’ve got to say, though, like I warned you in my PM, that I ...

Hello my dear~ I’m so psyched to see you’ve got a chapter of a new work up! (Even though I should be working on that Linked Worlds review. >_>

Hi SuperSquirrel! I continue to interrupt your writing. XD But I have to say that I really, really, really liked this chapter, especially the beginning of it. The conversations between ...

Hello again, Lav! I really hope you don’t mind that I continue to review this story. ^_^;; This was another really great chapter, and I’m really excited for how it ...

Hi again, Lav, I’m back! Yay! I have to say that I’m really glad to see some characters! I’ll admit that I really, really love character driven stories moreso than ...

Hellp, SuperSquirrel! I reviewed the first chapter of this a little while ago, and I never did find out whether I was helpful or not, so I really hope you ...

Hi LavenderBlue! I’m Zan. I just happened to stop by, and I thought your summary sounded interesting, so here I am for some fun prologue-reading action. : ) I have ...

Hi screamandshout! I’m sorry to be so late with this review. There’s really no excuse. XD But if it helps, I’ve been really stressed out this week with work and ...

Hi there, angel! Sorry about the delay in getting this too you, I’ve had sort of a stressful week. This is a pretty good chapter, but I can understand what ...

Hi there, Munchkinzizzles! I feel really bad about all the delay on getting this done—there really isn’t a whole lot of excuse. XD Sorry! Well, I have to say that ...

Hi Chaos! Sorry for the delay. ^_^ Wow, things just got serious. I’ve got to say, one of my favorite things about this chapter is that if the audience ever ...