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HI kafka i'll surely correct the errors but regarding the boredom i think you should read the previous chapters to overcome that. Thank you

Thank you shino. This has been really helpful

Stella hey again. once more your review was a lot of help to me. i just want to point out that the story we'll be a bit long, and i ...

Thank you so much stella for the review, it was really awesome, and helpful. i 'm looking forward to reading the ch.3 review . here is the ch.1 link btw

Hi heather your review is really great , and it truly inspired, but this is not the end , this is just a chapter. i will surely work on the ...

Thank you so much for the review it really helped me, i hope you'd read my other chapters. i cant tell you who the man is, you'll see as you ...

Your review was awesome sarah, it really helped a lot. I will get to the errors right now, but really thank you for the review i hope you'd chapter one ...

Thank you so much for your reviews. I will surely amend the errors. by reading this you have brought me joy and pleasure. thank you

Your reviews are most welcomed and i will start fixing the errors and writing another draft. I was truly inspired by your reviews, and it would be a pleasure if ...

You have truly inspired me. Your review was amazing and very informative. I will amend the errors that you pointed out. Thank you zion

pleasurable and Very descriptive!

Really awesome, yet try using less ostentatious words. They never equal profundity.

Your writing technique is really great, but you should be less vague. i had to re-read a couple of time so i can understand

It's tremendously great, yet you need to write a more mysterious intro

Thank you,That's only chapter 1. i would love to hear more of your verdicts though. any comments?