youngcamus

Yo! Youngcamus here with another review, keep in mind anything I say isn't designed to offend but to help you grow as a writer. I love the font. I love ...

Greetings! Youngcamus here to review your work. Nothing I say is intended to offend and is intended to make you a better writer. Life is full of ups and downs, ...

Yo! Youngcamus here with another review. My reviews are not meant to criticize, but to help you flourish and grow as a writer. This poem tackles an important and touching ...

It's not often that I request more detail, but for a poem as existential and deep as this one, you need more detail than what you've provided. For example, your ...

Short and sweet, only thing is, it's sweet with too much sweetener. Does that sound cryptic? It's supposed to be. Wouldn't you have much rather me said "It's too floral, ...

It's not often I ask a writer for more details given my sparse writing style. But this essay is extremely interesting, and I'd like to know more about you and ...

I admire how brief this poem is and how quickly it gets to the point. Only issue is, you end your lines in awkward places, making the poem itself read ...