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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: the Age of Blood

    scuse me whilst i stomp up and down in agony of cliches THE IMAGE OF DRACULA HAS RUINED THE GLORIOUS VAMPIRE NAME!!!!! now that i've finished that, although what you ...

    Aug 3, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Chasing

    i've had a couple of people aske what this poem is about, sorry, i should've made that clear it defines an inward struggle of someone who is burdened with responsibility ...

    Aug 3, 2007
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Ragged

    this is a mass reply to all your comments; First of all; Thankyou! All your comments are appreciated, especially constructive critism and tips! I am planning on editing it taking ...

    Jun 19, 2007
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Burned

    i agree with ShadowTwit, it makes you think, and it's very well written

    Jun 10, 2007
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Fantasy of Truth

    that was beautifully written, yes there were a few mistakes but i won't dwell on those i quite liked the language you used, and the themes, my family liked it ...

    May 11, 2007


More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes