Isn't Dracula one of the original vampires, or at least, the "classic" vampire? How'd you mean it's "ruined" vampires?
Anyway, I understand that "dawn" here is symbolic, but I think it would be more impressive and powerful if you titled the poems in reverse, if that makes sense. So, Dusk, Night and Dawn for the rise, zenith and fall of the vampires; it would be the opposite of Dawn, Day and Dusk for humans. Just something to consider.
Oh, and I hate to have to do this, but:
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