yizhongt

I really liked this piece. Even though it was short, it drew me in and I wanted to know more. I sense a good story in the offing, and this ...

This was a nice and well written short. It can be very easily turned into the prologue of a book, with probably a few additions here and there. What I ...

This is a well written story in my opinion. It is well structured and easy to read, which is very important. Spelling and grammar wise, I could not find anything ...

yizhongt here. This is a good story, and I can feel the pain and agony that the protagonist is feeling. Grammatically I find no problem with the story, except you ...

This was a very well written story. I also reviewed another story about the protagonist sitting for the civil service exam, but in comparison with your story, the other story ...

Your story reminded me of the old fables book I used to read, the one that always had a moral of the story at the end. I don't see any ...

Hi there, yizhongt here to review. Well for starters, you might want to tell the readers what sort of exam, not test, the protagonist is sitting for, as some people ...

This story was extremely enjoyable to read. It was nice reading about gladiator combat in the Star Wars universe. It brought me back to playing the first knight of the ...