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Re: Kinetic Crusade Chapter 4 Electric Drums
Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. Let me start by saying that you have an exciting and interesting story here. The descriptions you give of the surroundings and ...
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Re: Atana: Chapter 2
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Dec 17, 2016 -
Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 18 (Pompeii, Promptly)
Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. Let me just start by saying that I have not actually read the other chapters that have come before this, but it ...
Dec 17, 2016 -
Re: Werewolfing. 7
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Aug 26, 2016 -
Re: The Darknesses Resurgence
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Aug 25, 2016 -
Re: Untitled: Chapter 1 - The Message and the Mission (Part 2)
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Aug 18, 2016 -
Re: Unlucky Catkill Court (part 1.06)
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Re: Sword Spirit
Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. Let me just start by saying that you have an interesting story here. I like the concept of the Sword Guardian and ...
Aug 18, 2016 -
Re: The Coming War/Prologue
Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a really short review. Let me just say that I love the world you have built so far. I sense a distinctive Game of ...
Aug 16, 2016 -
Re: .
Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review as requested! Let me just say that the story is progressing well. I like how you have inserted Chie so seamlessly into ...
Aug 2, 2016 -
Re: Even Great Kings Die
Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a quick review. You have an interesting story here. I really want to know what happens to the young boy and also who the ...
Jul 7, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 01
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Jul 7, 2016 -
Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 2.1
Hey there , yizhongt here to leave a review. Let me just say that I'm fascinated by your story's concept of animals serving the military in space. The descriptions you ...
Jul 7, 2016 -
Re: Mickey Mouse in the White House
Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a short review. Let me just start by saying that I loved this piece you have written. It's really hilarious and cute. While reading ...
Jul 5, 2016 -
Re: Search For Peace Book 1 ~ The Great Separation Prologue
Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. Let me just start by saying that I liked this piece you have written. I liked the descriptions you used to build ...
Jul 5, 2016
