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So, Hi, first off. Secondly, happy review day. Third, this made me smile. Even though the end was rather gloomy, just the premise and use of description and full out ...

Hey. Here for a review. This was very well written, and I'd love to see more from you. A few tiny little nit-picks are all I've got. "Soon, the area ...

Hey there. I'll write this as I read. I have to say, I liked this straight away because of the formatting. Neat and orderly. Makes me think you know what ...

Hey there. So, this is a new one. Assuming 'Katie' is the person speaking here, based on the giant subtitle. Kind of unnecessary, but hey. At least we know. I ...

I'm not much for poetry, but I like this. John. Very interesting. One of the better poems that I have come across. I like the use of vocabulary, as is ...

So I'm going to write this as I read it. Comment numero uno. 'the' in the Nightguard has to be capitalized. That's a must. Sloppy titles don't attract readers. If ...

I agree for the most part with Lumi, but I really think you ought to come up with a different title for this. Self harm narrative? The Blade? So expected. ...

So, Stori did the nitpicking on technical writing errors. I won't be repeating her. Or him. Seems to me like she covered all of those things, so I'll go more ...

So, I'm going to attempt to stay away from repeating everything that the others said, but I agree on some level with hitxuanni. At first, I thought this was some ...