yamatri

hey I am here for the review, so, I am in love with the poems that tells a story and it's an interesting storyline, I wish you would add more ...

hi, I am here for the review! I have never written a haiku personally, so A haiku is a short, unrhymed poem that adheres to a specific three-line, seventeen-syllable format. ...

hey so I am here for the review so let's start from the beginning , you have little grammar mistakes , but that's not very much of a big deal, ...

hello mate , I am here for the review first the poem was very sweet read , it kind of reminded me of the poem I have read in school ...

"The moment brings a memory, fading in - a sudden thought. Then time stood still, I get a chill, thinking of things I wish I forgot." fading in means gradually ...

cute poem , I love the simplicity , I think you should continue this poem and write more, its sweet but it feels incomplete like a stanza from a poem, ...

hey I love the idea of this poem that it is truly a bittersweet feeling when you create something you can never be a part of something you have wished ...