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Re: Printer
Funny! It was really really nice, but I noticed you did not mention the 'printer' anywhere in the poem, other than the title. The ending was hilarious in a very ...
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Re: The Games Of the Wild
Hey! This was a nice piece of poetry. I noticed there was no punctuation, but then I suppose that's your way of writing. I loved the use of the word ...
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Re: Open
I absolutely loved this poem. I felt this distinct satisfaction when I finished it and it reminds of somebody who's lived a long, eventful life and know is burdened with ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Ode To My Significant Other
Okay. This was one of the BEST I've read so far! And what I especially liked was it was so crisp and yet it had a subtlety to it which ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Block of Imagination
This was great! And I could really relate since I'm having writer's blocks all the time! Your description was really good. I felt that in the second paragraph, the line- ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: The Pecking
This was amazing! I was visualising as I read the poem and I really could feel the magic...which is really good. I was just wondering, the line- A sweet and ...
Sep 28, 2014
