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Hey Xanthe here Firstly i loved this. I liked how you started the story with Melanie thinking about what had happened before, giving a background story to it all. It ...

Hey This was amazing. I love the way you made the kids communicated with each other. It was very realistic, the way the girl wanted to be with the boy ...

hey :) I loved this idea, it drew me in at the beginning with the event of something out of the ordinary and then it made me want to read ...

Hey, To be honest, this nearly made me cry. I love the emotion in this. This is a situation that everyone can relate to, it makes the reader feel sorry ...

Hey, First thing is i absolutely loved this. I love how you put all the the description into it. I could picture it so clearly in my head. Its really ...

This is a very good poem. There is a lot of emotion in it and it is very sad. It makes me want to cry for the chracter speaking in ...