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Nah,this one is very well written. I loved it very much. I found that it is 'uniquely' written. I mean I'm okay reading the whole story without the dialogues though. ...

Hi there. So this is your very first post here in YWS. I think you have a very sweet message in your poem. And I love the simplicity you put ...

Nah,I didn't expect this to happen. Now I sit here, with a sword to my throat... But,this is a good story. People would do anything to be with someone they ...

I love the meaning of your poem. It somehow reminds me of a poem The Road Not Taken. Nothing's the same but it conveys the message of choices and decisions ...

Hey there! I think you have a very sweet message in your poem. I could tell that a father is supposedly can be described as a Knight and that you ...

Hey there. I think your poem is pretty good,and I think you have done it beautifully in questioning your views of life. This is my favorite. [quoteWhich came first? Black ...

I agree with Daisuki. The poem gives me an overall picture of vampires,specifically. I was not scarred by you; I was merely trained, twisted into something sweetly fierce, a doe-eyed ...

Honestly,I instantly know that this is going to be a great poem the moment I read its title. I love it, cause I'm a fan of Gothic literature too. :) ...

Very well written! I feel like I'm reading a gothic poetry,which is stuffed with strong and brutal emotions you've got in your poem. And I'm looking forward for more works ...

I loved how it was well-written. It is full of expressions and strong emotions put up together and I can attach to those feelings you were trying to convey. By ...

I love it! I'm a new member so your poem is seemingly perfect for me. :) By the way, are you by any chance reading gothics poetry? I see dark ...

I loved it so much. I can relate so much with your words cause I am feeling that now too. :) I'm a beginner as well but you seem more ...

ahh,now i know how it looked for a lyric poetry. hahah. i was just posting a poem and i don't have any clue of these lyric dramatic narrative poetry :D ...