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Bravo xD

ah, ok! ^_^ It did remind me a bit of Animal Farm :) yup yup American farm girl right here lol

Thanks so much! ^_^

O_O Well dang lol

Hey, Aley! I like your interpretation very much :) Thanks for the advice on the title; I really do suck at that. I appreciate you stopping by to give your ...

Hey, Aley! I like your interpretation very much :) Thanks for the advice on the title; I really do suck at that. I appreciate you stopping by to give your ...

Hey, Aley! I like your interpretation very much :) Thanks for the advice on the title; I really do suck at that. I appreciate you stopping by to give your ...

thanks for the review, I appreciate it! You're right, probably should have spent a bit more time thinking up a title. Thanks again! :)

Lycando's right, you're able to edit your chapter anytime you want. It's most helpful to edit right after you get a review. That way, other reviewers won't be correcting the ...

I don't get it.

ROFL XD

braaaiiinnnss.....braaiiinsss....

Happy to help! As for improving your descriptions, I suggest just taking a deeper look at your favorite novels and finding which words really spurred your imagination. Description doesn't just ...

try reading this and maybe it will make more sense than my post x)

welcome :) Are you still in the middle of editing the other chapters or are you looking for more reviews? I'm thinking about reading more of this.