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Hey again! I'm glad I get to read another one of your poems! I thought it was cool how the beginning rhymed. You started to have something going when you ...

Hi! Sorry it took so long to get to these :) I really like it! It was very beautiful, and very visual! I feel like I could draw a picture ...

Hey Nargles :) I didn't really spot any big grammar mistakes. Maybe a comma was left out or needed here and there, but for the most part I'd say you're ...

I don't know what this is, but it sounds good! Maybe it's a little short, but for an excerpt I guess it's not that bad.

Well, I don't really know if you really want another opinion since you reviewed it yourself, but I'll give you one anyway, as long as I'm here. x) It was ...

This is good, you should definitely write more ^_^ Wolves are so much fun to read about! You only have a few errors you might want to double-check, like a ...

Hi! This is a pretty good start and not a bad cliffhanger, either. The only suggestion I can think of would be to add a little more description here and ...

Hey again :) This is another great chapter! Your writing was just as clean as before, so I'm really glad about that. I thought your dialogue was also smooth. I ...

Hey there! I think you did a great job on this first chapter. Within the first few paragraphs I had gotten into it :). You have a really relaxed writing ...

Hey again Abbey! First of all, I want to say I'm really impressed at how you took my advice and the other reviewer's advice to heart. It must've been uncomfortable ...

Hey again :) My first impression was that I was reading a different story than the preface I read a few minutes ago. They really do seem like entirely different ...

Hey :) I liked this very much, best thing I've read all day. You seem to know what you're doing as a writer and I appreciate the attention to detail. ...

Hi! I think you have a good start here. I always like reading about stories with superheroes or kids with superpowers xD My favorite part about this was the ending, ...

Oooh wow I love the cliffhanger! I definitely did not expect this to take a turn so quickly. Although I had no idea what Isabella could've been doing all this ...

Hey again :) I like the turn of events, and also the fact you aren't scared to kill off some of your characters, lol. But I'm a little confused at ...