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“DAD! MOM! I’m leaving for school.” Usually, it’s a good thing to refrain from using caps lock in your story. The only place you see it is in children’s books, ...

Transcend the realms of time and flow deep into my soul where a heavy mist awaits. When undertones drown security in a sea of “discussions”. When sorrows lurk in the ...

damn, my computer's being a tard x( I hope this posts ok '...And that's how I ended up here,' Louis sighed as he and Lyrah walked amongst the ruins of ...

When they look through their eyes I bet they only see far enough That the grief of yesterdays yesterday's convulsions Overwhelms them Because only last month They were busy with ...

Yay! A new work!! :D Writing is a way of seeing things A way to uncover the invisible glaze That the world has coated you with Shielding you from seeing ...

Hey Lele! I've been rather horrible with keeping up with my reviews, so sorry :( About this poem, I think you might be able to separate it into stanzas Is ...

I'm back for part two! :D Brownfur was flying through a canyon, the wind soft and airy under his wings, and a river winding far beneath him. The canyon and ...

Hi! Brownfur dove through the night with the others, emotionless. He remembered when he was younger, how the night seemed so alive to him. Now he was numb. If he ...

Hai :D Sorry it took so long! And I see you've already had a very helpful review, and you've edited too! So I'll probably be repeating a lot of things ...

I'm back again :) I tried to hide behind the tiger as my mother’s angry voice echoes s hould be ‘echoed’ if you’re keeping this past tense through the damp ...

Here again :) I flew softly along the wind currents, my shocking black and silver feathers glistening in the frigid morning sun. I flew over a house, with a young ...

Alright, another new story! Siva glanced behind her as she held her twin daughters. The animals were keeping a close eye out for their shared enemy, Dijns. Cloaking the night ...

New story woot woot! Maya carefully shut the ancient books of spells by Xavier Bloodrose as she watched her majestic amethyst eyed raven perch on her small, wooden windowsill I ...

Now for part 2! :D I stood in the kitchen, remembering the laughter, tears, and anger that once lived here. Gone was the one person that brightened our lives. Her ...

Hey Soul! I spent some time last night reviewing nearly all your work on this site :D I hope my comments are helpful! I apologize for any grumpiness that comes ...