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Hey Meg =] Sorry I'm a bit late... So. I think all of the structual and grammatical stuff has been covered, so I'll just give you my overall opinion of ...

Hey Angel - you don't mind if I call you that, do you? =] So. Like the reviewers above, I couldn't find many grammatical mistakes at all. I must say ...

Hey Kara =] Welcome to YWS! I'm Dudette and I'm going to attempt to review this for ya' :D Ah yes, it was Friday the thirteenth that day. - It ...

Hey Esmé =] Wow. That was definitely intense. a clatter so loud that matching the little shriek that escapes my breast. - I don't think this sentence is worded right. ...

Hey Terpsichore =] I'm Dudette and I'm going to attempt to review this for ya' So. I honestly couldn't find that much wrong with it! You shouldn't be scared to ...

Hey =] I'm here as I said I would be :) So, there weren't many nit-piks at all, and I think Mars got all of the ones that I would ...

Hey mizzkitty =] Aww - I have writers block at the moment too - it's so annoying :roll: Nit-piks; The three most popular girls in the school. - I'd take ...

Hey Kat =] I don't think we've met before. I'm Dudette :D So. This story was definitely creepy! Nit-piks; did not found shelter - 'found' should be 'find' He didn’t ...

Hey Colleen =] I was wondering when you were going to post something new - it seems like ages since I last read something of yours. So, I thought this ...

Hey Pixie =] So I got your PM asking for help on chapter length, so I thought I'd try and explain a little here. Bear with me though - I'm ...

Hey yrclever =] Thanks for the PM! I'll try my best to help you :) any hold that he might have had on her life. - It might just be ...

Hey yrclever =] This was a really sweet story and it was an enjoyable read :) I don't have many nit-piks at all; He worked, like most people in the ...

Hey =] I'm glad that my review on the first part helped you, so I'm back to review this piece for ya' Nit-piks; had led a happy life, he wondered ...

Hey anti-pop =] I really enjoyed reading this. I think it flowed well and was easy to read. I couldn't find many nit-piks at all; They all said and wanted ...

Hey Pippie =] Thanks for the PM :) So, I really liked this part. There wasn't much action, but a lot of questions were answered and new ones asked. the ...