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Hey PhantomInvador =] Welcome to YWS! I love your avatar - I used to love watching Danny Phantom :D Anyway... I couldn't find any grammatical mistakes whilst reading this - ...

Hey Yodaer! :wink: I'm glad to see the next part up - it seems ages since I read the last part. So. I'll try my best to give you the ...

Hey Sela =] Thanks for the PM! So... I couldn't find any nit-piks, as always, and I must say that I think this chapter helped to move the story along ...

Hey =] I'm back for part two! The second they pulled into the cobblestone driveway of their quaint country home June swung - Comma after 'home' She ditched her crutches ...

Hey =] So everyone above seems to have already picked up on the nit-piks, so I'm just going to give you my opinion. I really liked the idea you have ...

Hey Leslie =] Welcome to the wonderful world of YWS! I'm Dudette :D So. Wow - this is really deep and I totally agree with what you have written. Sometimes ...

Hey =] I love the song you've written this story too. It's by my favourite band - if you haven't guessed already from looking at my avvie lol Anyways - ...

Hey =] I definitely agree with the other two reviewers, in that this is a powerful piece. Nit-piks; Finally!! - Too much punctuation looks unprofessional. One exclamation mark is enough. ...

Hey Sela =] Thanks for the PM! So, I only noticed one nit-pik; before sat down at last in the kitchen - You need 'I' before 'sat' Story-wise, I'm still ...

Hey Evi =] I couldn't find any mistakes at all whilst reading this - so well done on that =] It flowed extremely well and I'm really jealous of your ...

Hey =] So I've just read all three parts that you have posted so far and I really have nothing bad to say at all. I couldn't find any mistakes, ...

Hey =] I'm going to try and take a look at this for ya' They glow and their color is as rich as gems, my eyes cannot even see the ...

Hey =] So I don't really have time at the moment to give this a proper review, but I had to tell you that I think this story is adorable. ...

Hey Meg =] Thanks for the PM! So... onto nit-piks =] Maybe there's a whole pack of celebrities that are secretly magical elves. - I lol'd at this :lol: She ...

Hey =] So I've read both parts of this and I have to say that it was a really enjoyable read. You managed to turn a story about two brothers ...