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Arrow here! Okay, whoa...the fact that this poem describes sorrow so accurately is terrifying (in a good way!) I love how you wrote each verse to be descriptive without being ...

Arrow here with another review! Not a bad start for a story, although it could use some improvements. For starters-- The arrow soared through the air, thwishing past the Elf's ...

Arrow here with a review! I really love how this was written. Everything goes together smoothly, and the dialogue immediately pulls the reader in. I like how you wrote the ...

Arrow here with a review! wOw this is an interesting story. I really love how you wrote this! It's very detailed and it gives the reader a good picture of ...

Heyyy, Arrow here with a review! I really like this poem. Everything is really smooth and it all flows together perfectly. I really love how you added in things that ...

Arrow here once again! I am a little disappointed with the lack of background here. It seems like we just jump directly into the story with no context. All I ...

Arrow here! Alrighty, given that I haven't read the other chapters, let's see how well I can do this xD. Despite how Tawsif seems to act towards Meherin, I do ...

Arrow here! Given how short this is, I am not sure how much I have to say about it, but here we go! I suggest adding a bit more detail ...

Arrow here! I like the amount of rhyming you have in the song. I love how you perfectly describe the topic at hand here. The way the words just flow ...