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thank you

thank you

I liked the words and the language used. It was amazing beautiful and fantastic all put favorite part was when you wrote.I freeze in the cold north wind, And choke ...

I liked the words and the language used. It was amazing beautiful and fantastic all put favorite part was when you wrote.I freeze in the cold north wind, And choke ...

I really liked it. I think that if you made it longer that would be better. I liked how you left the imagination up to the reader. I found no ...

I really liked it. I think that if you made it longer that would be better. I liked how you left the imagination up to the reader. I found no ...

It was really exiting even though it was short. I liked t=how you left a lot of space left for imagination which is what I think made it scary.

I liked it even though it was really dark. I would suggest that you make another one about not being caught after the body and stuff are dumped.But my favorite ...

I liked it. I couldn't find any punctuation or spelling problems.I like how itcatches your attention and its very fast paced for a short story. Whill you make another?