wunmi

Its a good poem. Using rhyme and not using much punctuation that indicate stopping points helped speed up the poems pace, this caused me to feel the dolls fear, anxiety, ...

Firstly I think the rythem and tone of this poem is amazing. It shows your experiance and your understanding of your style because i think poems like that is hard ...

I really like it. the title gave no hints about what it would lead to so i had a pleasant surprise. I dont know what made me like it exactly ...

I like the question marks. For me, when I read it quickened the pace of the piece. It did make the person who seemed to ask the question sound nervous, ...

I liked it, its diffrent from the poems I usually read. I felt there as real raw emotion in that poem, but the rhyme used in it took away from ...

Amazing and the first piece I've ever read on this site. It sent inspiration wirling and swooshing in my head. I think the way rhythem was used in this piece ...