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Re: the little antisocial bug
Okay i'm so happy i clicked on this because this was too just too adorable. I legit loled right now reading it because of the adorable purposeful spelling. I love ...
Aug 10, 2017 -
Re: Her Relationship with Depression
I loved reading this because I love reading plays/scripts and you did great. I think the beginning bullets of notes were absolutely right in setting the tone. The dialogue was ...
Aug 10, 2017 -
Re: Barefoot
I like how this writes almost as a personal diary entry. It's informal but the narrative is still smooth. However, I felt the last two seasons were neglected. Spring got ...
Aug 2, 2017 -
Re: Moonless
Wow, that was so beautiful! You should be happy you've gotten back into writing because you definitely have something to work off of here. I love your writing style also, ...
Aug 2, 2017 -
Re: Isaac
Hi! I think you have a great piece going here and Isaac looks like a character with potential and discovery, especially with inevitable struggle. Your writing flows pretty well other ...
Aug 2, 2017 -
Re: Terrorism has no religion
This is very powerful and I love the rhythm because it perfectly sets the tone for this scene. I had to read it a few times to take it in, ...
Aug 2, 2017
