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Thanks, glad you enjoyed the poem! :)

Thanks for the review! :D

Ah, that makes sense!

My pleasure :)

Thanks for the review! I%u2019m glad you enjoyed the poem.

No problem! :)

Thanks for the review! The %u2018branch on a bonfire%u2019 was meant to emphasise the enormity of the fire the narrator is experiencing, but I totally get what you mean. As ...

Thanks for the review, the %u2018i can%u2019t see, either%u2019 didn%u2019t feel quite right to me, either, but I wasn%u2019t really sure what to replace it with. I%u2019ll revise that section ...

Thank you so much for the review! I didn%u2019t even know assonance existed - I just thought it sounded cool ahaha. As for the stanzas, I did originally have them ...

Thanks for the review! I mainly tried to keep the description to a limit to show how much pain the narrator is in, but I get what you mean.

No problem.

Thanks, and no problem!