writeitalldown

I agree with the emotion of anger, and fear was there but I wish it was more exaggerated thats all. This is a VERY good poem, but everything can always ...

This is what I simply love about your poetry! Your beginnings pull the reader in, and your endings are always so bold. Perfection once again.

I set out to review one of your poems in return for reviewing mine... I can't reall critique this though, its simply awing. Good job.

WOW!!!! Amazing, you blew me away! I actually have tears in my eyes, please keep writing and NEVER give up!

Yupp...he got hit by a bus!

I like it.... you can never have too much imagery!!:)