wordwing

Same.

Wow...

I am not offended at all. What makes you think that? I'm grateful for your review and thoughts, have a good day.

No, she is actually talking about the past, and that "we" represents older people, and the last few lines are a methaphor.

The description says a lot, @Radrook.

I'm sorry for confusing you XD. But the child doesn't shatter because of explanations,look at this line: when my thoughts are cast plus I didn't describe that part well, it ...

pigs= translated name for big bombs

Yass, fellow mythology geek

Hello! Wordwing here! Let's jump right into it. 1.lack of commas 2Your soul is so pure It makes me blind with the light My opinion is that this should be ...

Wow...

This is just too beautiful. I can't even...

No problem ^-^

I want them to review it.

Thanks!