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Re: Jorge's Birthday
Hi Naydy!!! Great chapter!!! You see a little more description helps a story go a long way. I really did like it. Thought I noticed something here: "Well, you know ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Old Friend
Hey Naydy!!! I like the chapter!! It was really nice!! I liked how you put a little bit of a background story. But I did notice somthing that I want ...
Apr 24, 2010 -
Re: J.D. doesn't have friends.
Hi Naydy!!! I'm back!!! I liked it, but I thou gt it was a little short. Maybe you should add a little more description. But I liked it. Oh and ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: YWS Classroom
Why wasn't I in it? Kidding!! :smt003 I LOVED IT!!!! This story deserves caps!!! (I secretly love using caps shh!) It was totally funny!! I loved it when you said ...
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: Day Light Stars
Hello VampireMistress!!!! I'm wookielover17, but you can call me Wookie!! So let me just say: AWESOME!!!! (sorry YWS-ers for the caps) You have an amazing ability to get the reader ...
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: New Student
HI NAYDY!!!! (sorry for the caps I'm just exited :mrgreen:)I am so exited to see a new chapter up!! I LOVED it!!! It was really good. I wanna get to ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: First Day
Hi Naydy!!! It's Wookie again!!! I loved the chapter!!! It was really good!!! I think you have a very basic idea of what you want and I like it. I ...
Mar 20, 2010 -
Re:
Hey Naydy!!! I'm wookielover17, but you can call me Wookie. I really liked this piece I thought that you settled her background story very well. And I can't wait to ...
Mar 18, 2010 -
Re: Lithium chapter 3: New Encounters
Hi their!!! Remember me? It's been a long time since you've posted. Nice to see you did. Let me start with: I love this chapter!!! I think it's awesome!! I ...
Jan 27, 2010 -
Re: captain.classy
Aw Forest that was soooo sweet!!! I thik it's awesome and you did a great job!!! captain.classy is one lucky YWSer! :lol: (why am I laughing...?) Great job!!! Talk to ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Irishfire
Aw Forest! That was so beautiful! Irish is sure lucky to have met you!! I know I am! :mrgreen: :elephant: (dancing elephant. I love it!) So yeah that was really ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Awakened (prologue)
Hi Cynara!! Long time no write! I've missed your writing!! (did that sound creepy?) Well I thought this was awesome!!! It's suspenseful and it keeps you wanting more! And that ...
Jan 4, 2010 -
Re: A tale of Kindergarten
Aw!! This story is so cute!!! I can't believe this really happened to you! Your brother is so sweet defending you like that. :) Oh and I really liked it. ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: The Wolf's Howl
Oh my God!! I loved this poem!!! I almost cried when I read it!!! I loved it!!! Great job! :mrgreen: :elephant:
Dec 22, 2009 -
Re: Another Song: in need of a title. Please suggest :)
Those lyrics were awesome!!! I'd play it but I can't play my guitar yet... At all... It's sad really. But the lyrics were epic!! I loved them but I couldn't ...
Oct 23, 2009
