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Re: Letters to the Front Line
I really like this poem. I love the way all the letter are addressed to different people. I don't know if it's me but I think although they are addressed ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Not As They Seem chapt. 1
Chapter 3 now please :D Unlike freewriter I love vampire stories and this is so different to the ones I normally read. My eyes were literally glued to your words. ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Cat Steps draft (28/4/11)
i think you have a great writing style. I was really into it until i got to “Here, most likely…” I tried to shake off my mood, putting on a ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: An adventurer's pride [Chapter 1: A unexpected meeting]
You are a very talented writer. The pace to begin with was quite dreary and slow, but just as I was thinking of exiting, you kick-started my imagination and your ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: The Truth Behind the Haunting of Bramble House.
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May 28, 2011 -
Re: Hope
Heyy I think this new piece is definately better than the old one. :D I really like the lines : It yearned to be free, to be exhaled into the ...
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: Defy the Light
This is really sweet but I don't quite feel any emotion. :S Keep writng :D -K xxx I'm sorry that it was a really short and terrible review ;) x
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: all these tangled thorns
I really like this. :) It almost made me cry. It's so deep and I love your style. :D Keep writing -K xxx
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: "Things I Don't Like" by Death
I LOVE this. :D It's so funny and I love the writing style. In my opion it could do with a better intoduction, but the one you have got isn't ...
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: Scars: Impending Storm Chapter One
I would love to write a novel with my friends, but sadly none of them like literature as much as I. :D I personally would take out the 'Noob' part, ...
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: deleted
:D this poem is awesome I t's really good I love your pieces x
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: Please, please just give your opinion - even if brief.
Hi Wow! This is really good. I love the fact that it's so true! You write just like my friend, yet your style is so much more distinguished. I love ...
Feb 8, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 1
Hey It's a really good first chapter. My only problem is that it's a bit fast paced. Everything doesn't need to happen now, you can save some of your secrets ...
Feb 8, 2011 -
Re: The Gold Watch (chapter 1)
Wow! This is really good. Can't wait to read more. I love your wide use of vocabulary, maybe this is just me but I thought Ronnie and Jackie were brothers, ...
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: Daddy's Song
Hi This is really sweet and it sounds like it comes from the heart. I really enjoy it. Maybe instead of leaving it pure and simple (which is great) you ...
Feb 7, 2011